Review Wednesday – The Girl Before by J P Delaney

img_1970It’s always great to read an intriguing premise, one that tells you that you have to read this book and that was how I felt when I first read the blurb for The Girl Before by J.P. Delaney.

A perfect house built by an architect who will accept nothing short of perfection, or at least his version of it. The house is available to rent but not just to anyone with the cash ( and this house is a bargain), applicants must fill in a lengthy questionnaire and be approved personally by the owner/designer Edward Monkford. And it doesn’t stop there, rules (over 200 of them) must be adhered to; no clutter, no pets, no children, very few possessions. The list goes on.

This concept sets up the initial intrigue of the story. Why would anyone agree to live under such rigid conditions? But then, Edward is an unusual and intriguing man and Jane, the latest applicant has fallen under his spell as well as that of the beautiful, minimalist house.

The story is told from two points of view and in two time-frames. As Jane moves into One Folgate Street and learns more about Edward, whose wife and son tragically died, she also begins to learn something about a former tenant, Emma. So the action Goes back and forth and we see the house with Emma and boyfriend Simon in occupancy and with Jane.

As jane delves deeper into Emma’s life (and death) it becomes apparent that there are a lot of parallels between the two women. What really happened to Emma and, Jane wonders increasingly, was Edward responsible?

The story is complex. Both women have relationships with the Ice-cold Edward, both have suffered some trauma in their past. At some point I felt that the author introduced too many angles and that maybe the creepiness of the perfect house and it’s strange owner were in danger of becoming swamped by a whole gamut of other findings and revelations that made it hard to like any of the characters.

However, the book is certainly a page turner. The narrative flows easily and the short, sharp changes in viewpoint made it a fast and satisfying read. I would usually say that I love a convoluted plot with many twists and turns but, in this case, just for once, maybe a little less would have been more, just as with the house that features so prominently in the story.

11 thoughts on “Review Wednesday – The Girl Before by J P Delaney

  1. Mae Clair

    That’s an excellently written review. I enjoy books that go back and forth in time with story lines. The plot of this one also sounds intriguing. Based on your review, I’m going to look it up on Amazon.


    1. wendyunsworth Post author

      Thanks very much Mae Clair, it is an unusual story; I hope you enjoy it and do let me know. You comment reminds me that I did not credit and thank the publisher and Netgalley for the ARC copy that I read. I will go back and do that. The book is due to be published on 2nd February; you should find it on Amazon after that date. Best wishes!

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      1. Mae Clair

        Yep! Already checked and I see that it’s on pre-order. Did the lack of quotes for one of the POV’s bother you? That’s the only thing that concerns me.


      2. wendyunsworth Post author

        To be honest, not too much, maybe more at first but the ARC I received was in need of some tidying up anyway so I just accepted that it wouldn’t look like the finished article. It’s an unusual choice though and I saw one or two reviewers saying that it was a bit offputting, but I think after the first few chapters my eye just sort of filled them in like it does with typos!


    1. wendyunsworth Post author

      That’s interesting Jacqui. I was in a conversation the other day about titles and the feeling was that the winning streak of ‘girl’ in the title may be coming over-used now. But I will agree it seems to have been a great formula! Starting with The Girl With the Dragon Tattoo, I have read quite a few in the past couple of years!
      Enjoy your conference and if you get any hints on any up and coming ‘hot’ words, let me know!



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